lunes, 22 de febrero de 2010

creation of red rats

One time they were 4444 rats in a room they were very happy and they had infinitive food.

one day the found a liquid called x sustance so they drankthat and they became red rats and they started to pock people and people became zombies and a man called fredy was the only one ho survive so he was with depresure and he bacame a hulk sohe had many problrms and he had to eat zombies but when he drank 4444 zombies he became a rat a 44444 meters long rat it was a mutant and he needed to remove zombies body for people became normal people.


so his family dead and he would improve his powers.then in the ashhes days the zombies went to his house and he had to bombact with 777777777777 red rats and he got 50 weapons finally he activate the nucler subatomic explotion and the end and the begeaning of the rats apears.inocent people died rest in peace amen.

4 comentarios:

  1. it is a good work. remember the conjugation of the verb to die

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  2. It is good but in times it is so borring and you repeat to much the numbers you need to impruve a lot keep working

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  3. This is a very good work but be careful whit past and don´t mix the words drankthat.

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